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Best of Spring
In this Best of Spring Series I chose these photos because I liked the colors that blended with the blurred frame. ...
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In this draft, I am still feeling out the ways of my artists, Jerry Uelsmann. I am supposed to take several pictures and merge them togethe... -
After changing my artist, I was able to produce more photos. I took small toys/action figures and placed them in various parts on campus. ... -
When I tried to edit my photos the wifi sucked, so I kept lagging which made it really hard to edit. I tried my best, but it didn't turn...
These are interesting subjects. I'm interested to see how you further pursue this. My main suggestion is to focus on the foreground (toy characters) more.
ReplyDeleteI really like all of your posts because they all correlate with each other which makes your post flow really nicely. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI really like your photos because they provide an insight into a tiny world. I think as you go on, you can start to improve your storytelling skills through your images. Overall, good job!
ReplyDeleteI like your work with minifigures, but suggestion is to make all the figures be in focus and give the figures an intended purpose for doing suck actions, ex. fighting, like you could do a battle scene via photos with two figures and make them recurring characters.
ReplyDeleteI like the stories you tell and how you capture surrealism.
ReplyDeleteI thought these photos where very different from each other. I think your did a good job, I don't have any suggestions for you.
ReplyDeleteContrary to what you said in your artist statement, I actually think you did a pretty good job with telling more of story with your photos. I agree with other comments about focusing more on the characters themselves. Great work.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job at following a story line. I think some of your images are a little blurry and making them more clear would make your series stronger. Good work
ReplyDeleteI think you fulfilled the idea and concept of a storyline. I like how some photos were darker which creates a different mood/tone within the story. My only suggestion is to focus the main subjects a more. Great Work!
ReplyDeleteI like how many different scenes you were able to create from the limited amount of figures that you used, good work
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